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Of Daphne by Orontes, and th' infpir'd

Caftalian fpring, might with this Paradife
Of Eden strive; nor that Nyfeian ile

Girt with the river Triton, where old Cham,
Whom Gentiles Ammon call and Lybian Jove,
Hid Amalthea and her florid fon

Young Bacchus from his stepdame Rhea's eye;
Nor where Abaffin kings their iffue guard,
Mount Amara, though this by fome fuppos'd
True Paradife under the Ethiop line
By Nilus head, inclos'd with fhining rock,
A whole day's journey high, but wide remote
From this Affyrian garden, where the Fiend

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And fad Proférpin's wrath, them and thofe emotions of envy, in tosaffright; which he is represented. There but not as it is commonly used at lines which follow, wherein they is a fine fpirit of poetry in the this time, as in Cato,

So Pluto feis'd of Proferpin convey'd.

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are defcribed as fitting on a bed of
flowers by the fide of a fountain,
amidst a mixed affembly of animals.
Addifer

293. Truth, wifdom, fan&titude fe-
were and pure,
(Severe but in true filial freedom
placd)

Whence true authority in men ;] The middle verfe ought to have been put thus in a parenthesis; for the true authority in men arifes not from filial freedom, but from their having truth, wisdom, and sancti

tude

Saw undelighted all delight, all kind

Of living creatures new to fight and ftrange.
Two of far nobler fhape erect and tall,

Godlike erect, with native honor clad

In naked majesty seem'd lords of all,

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And worthy feem'd; for in their looks divine

"The image of their glorious Maker fhone,
Truth, wisdom, fanctitude fevere and pure,
(Severe but in true filial freedom plac'd)
Whence true authority in men; though both
Not equal, as their fex not equal feem'd;
For contemplation he and valor form'd,
For foftness the and sweet attractive grace,

tude fevere and pure, that is ftrict holiness; which are qualities that give to magiftrates true authority, that proper authority which they may want who yet have legal authority. This is Milton's meaning: and for explaining the word Levere, he inferts a verse to show that he does not mean fuch sa Janelitude or holiness as is rigid and auftere, but fuch as is plac'd in Filial freedom; alluding to the fcriptural expreffions, which reprefent good Chriftians as free and as the Yons of God: on which foundation our obedience (from whence our fanctitude arifes) is a filial, and ́not a flavish one; a reverence ra

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ther than a fear of the Deity.
From hence we may fee that Dr.
Bentley had no fufficient reafon to
change fevere in the first verfe into
ferene, and to throw out the second
verfe entirely. Pearce.
297. For contemplation he and va
lor form'd,

For foftness foe and fweet attractive

grace,] The curious reader may pleafe to obferve upon thefe two charming lines, how the num bers are varied, and how artfully be and be are placed in each verfe, fo as the tone may fall upon them, and yet fall upon them differently. The author might have given both exactly the fame tone, but every

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He for God only, fhe for God in him :
His fair large front and eye fublime declar'd
Abfolute rule; and hyacinthin locks
Round from his parted forelock manly hung

ear muft judge this alteration to be much for the worse.

For valor he and contemplation form'd,

For foftnefs fhe and fweet attrac

tive grace.

299. He for God only, fhe for God in bim:] The author gave

it thus, fays Dr. Bentley,

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Cluftring,

Καλ' δε καρτα
Ουλάς ηκε κόμας, υακινθίνω από
θες ομοίας.
Odyff. VI. 231.

Back from his brows a length of
hair unfurls,

His hyacinthin locks defcend in wavy curls. Broome.

Euftathius interprets hyacinthin locks by black locks, and Suidas by very dark brown; and Milton

He for God only, fhe for God and in like manner means brown or

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black locks, diftinguishing Adam's hair from Eve's in the color as well

as in other particulars. It is probable the hyacinth among the Ancients might be of a darker color than it is among us.

303. Cluftring] His hair hung cluftring, or like bunches of grapes, as her's was like the young fhoots or tendrils of the vine. They are oppos'd, you fee, the one to the other.

303. his fhoulders broad:] Broad fhoulders are always affign'd to the ancient heroes; in Homer they have sugeas wuss, in Virgil latos bumeros. But I wonder that Milton has given no indication that Adam had a beard; not the leaft down or bloffom on his chin, the firft access to manhood; which the Greek and Latin poets dwell on, as the principal part of manly

beauty:

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Cluftring, but not beneath his shoulders broad:

She as a veil down to the flender waste

Her unadorned golden treffes wore
Dishevel❜d, but in wanton ringlets wav'd

beauty and our Spenfer, B. 2. Cant. 12. St. 79. and B. 3. Cant. 5. St. 29. Bentley. His beard is a particular that the poet could not have forgot, but I fuppofe he purpofely omitted it, because Raphael and the principal painters always represent him without one; I believe no one remembers ever to have seen a good print or picture of him with one, and Milton frequently fetches his ideas from the works of the greatest mafters in painting.

304. She as a veil down to the

flender wafte

Her unadorned golden treffes &c.] In like manner Marino paints his Venus. Adon. Cant. 8. St. 47.

Onde a guifa d'un vel dorato, e folto

Celando il bianco feu trà l'onde loro

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could not poffibly carry too high the charms of Woman, as the first came out of the hands of her heavenly Maker. But as a picture of this kind would have been too light and gay for the graver turn of Milton's plan, he has very artfully mentioned the charms of her perfon in general terms only, and directed the reader's attention more particularly to the beauty of her mind. Moft great poets have la bor'd in a particular manner the delineation of their Beauties (Ariofto's Alcina, Taffo's Armida, and Spenfer's Belphabe) and 'tis very probable that the portrait of Eve would have rival'd them all, if the chafte correctness of our author's Mufe had not restrain'd him.

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305. golden treffes] This fort of hair was moft admir'd and celebrated by the Ancients, I fup

In mille minutiffimi rufcelli
Dal capo fcaturir gli aurei ca- pofe as it ufually betokens a fairer

pelli.

The poet has, I think, fhowed great judgment and delicacy in avoiding in this place the entring into a circumftantial defcription of Eve's beauty. It was, no doubt, a very tempting occafion of giving an indulgent loofe to his fancy; fince the moft lavish imagination VOL. I.

kin and finer complexion. It would be almoft endlefs to quote paffages to this purpose in praise of Helen and the other famous beauties of antiquity, Venus herself, the Goddefs of beauty, is described of this color and complexion; and therefore is ftiled golden Venus, Xpoon Apedin by Homer, and Venus aurea by Virgil. As Milton had

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As the vine curls her tendrils, which imply'd
Subjection, but requir'd with gentle fway,
And by her yielded, by him beft receiv'd,
Yielded with coy fubmiffion, modest pride,
And fweet reluctant amorous delay.

Nor those mysterious parts were then conceal❜d,
Then was not guilty fhame, dishonest shame
Of nature's works, honor difhonorable,
Sin-bred, how have ye troubled all mankind

the taste of the Ancients in other things, fo likewife in this particuHe must certainly have preferred this to all other colors, or he would never have beftow'd it upon Eve, whom he defign'd as a pattern of beauty to all her daughters. And poffibly he might at the fame time intend a compliment to his wife; for I remember to have heard from a gentleman who had feen his widow in Chefhire, that fhe had hair of this color. It is the more probable, that he intended a compliment to his wife in the drawing of Eve; as it is certain, that he drew the portrait of Adam not without regard to his own perfon, of which he had no mean opinion.

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long hair, it is a fhame unto him? And therefore Milton gives Adam locks, that bung cluftring, but not beneath his shoulders broad. But if a woman have long hair (continues the Apoftle) it is a glory to her, for her hair is given her for a covering or veil as it is render'd in the margin: and therefore our author gives Eve very long hair, he wore ber golden treffes as a veil down to the fender wafte. And this long hair the Apoftle confiders as an argument and token of her subjection, a covering, a veil, in fign that the is under the power of her husband; and for the fame reafon the poet fays that it imply'd fubjection: fuch excellent use doth he make of the facred Writings. The poet adds which imply'd that this fubjection was requir'd by Subjection,] The poet manifeftly him with gentle fway, and yielded alludes to St. Paul's first Epistle to by her, but it was beft receiv'd by the Corinthians, Chap. XI. Doth him, when yielded with coy fubmifnot even nature itself teach you (fays fion, modeft pride, and fweet reluc the Apoftle) that if a man have tant amorous delay, which is ex

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